User talk:Balladofwindfishes
Trivia, ect.
Attempt to use the existing format in your alterations. --Mechlord 01:45, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- Which is? I'm just moving things to places they belong and removing things that don't make sense. Gameplay tips are not trivia, nor is mentioning the Scout and Engy hold their pistol differently
- Now they're getting utterly inconsistent. Slow down a bit. --Mechlord 01:57, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- How so? Elements of how a weapon works are not trivia (see Frontier Justice edit you reverted). The Bonk thing is mindless trivia. Lots of effects end if you hit the resupply -- Balladofwindfishes 02:00, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- If I may interject, I agree with most of the removals you made from the trivia sections but a lot of the times you tried to add it to the article, you just appended the trivia to the end of one of the paragraphs. I'm looking at your edits to the Bonk and Shortstop pages in particular. Doing it like that is a little sloppy and it would be nicer if you thought about how to work it in so that the flow of the paragraph is preserved. If an item seems very difficult to add to the main article but it still seems relevant, then maybe the Trivia section was the best place for it after all, or maybe it should be deleted outright. You're not necessarily doing anything wrong, but slow down a bit and put a little bit more consideration into your work. I guarantee it will come out better. --
-- 02:48, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- If I may interject, I agree with most of the removals you made from the trivia sections but a lot of the times you tried to add it to the article, you just appended the trivia to the end of one of the paragraphs. I'm looking at your edits to the Bonk and Shortstop pages in particular. Doing it like that is a little sloppy and it would be nicer if you thought about how to work it in so that the flow of the paragraph is preserved. If an item seems very difficult to add to the main article but it still seems relevant, then maybe the Trivia section was the best place for it after all, or maybe it should be deleted outright. You're not necessarily doing anything wrong, but slow down a bit and put a little bit more consideration into your work. I guarantee it will come out better. --
- How so? Elements of how a weapon works are not trivia (see Frontier Justice edit you reverted). The Bonk thing is mindless trivia. Lots of effects end if you hit the resupply -- Balladofwindfishes 02:00, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- Now they're getting utterly inconsistent. Slow down a bit. --Mechlord 01:57, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
